Kia ora, I am a student at Mairehau High School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Tuesday, November 13, 2018
DADWAVERS
I was marching down the street of London. confetti was flying all around me. the noise was deafening. But i didn't care. It was over. I looked around me and saw people kissing their loved ones. I was still marching when my mate Callum he touched me on the shoulder and said well done we did good . I went out to the crowd. iIsaw other soldiers get a cigarette out and have a puff . I was said and angry because one of my friends and brothers lost their lives in the war. I said to myself i was lucky. The king had his speech. I go out to find my wife after the speech. I was walking around and i looked down and stared at my medals and badges my grandfather comes crashing into me i missed you you have someone to meet. my wife comes out behind my grandparents. hello my darling i got a bullet wound and it hurts. i have been living with it for a year so we should go home.
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